pokesurviver(the comic)

[Riachu]

this is my new comic poke surviver if you want me to include some of your work in it pm me heres the second episode lol me told you me no ga* croman yes you are whats next in the comic just stay tune to find out

i do have permision to use cleff champ bob so dont go saying i dont

Introduction
Episode 1

[Nightjirachi]

It's really cool, but there's 2 problems:

1) You can barely see the writing.
2) You have spelling and grammar mistakes.

[Riachu]

yeah sorry i need to make the txt small or it want fit

[Nightjirachi]

It's that you can't see the writing properly.

[Riachu]

ile try and fix that up got any ideas on how to make it more visabul

[Nightjirachi]

Experiment with the writing and see which writing colour goes with the background.

[Riachu]

k so do what i did wth the wurgle steeler one got it

[pikablu]

those are some nice pictures